How Eight Year Olds Can Use a Computer

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. I think kids should have their own computer because their brother or sister will go on the computer and take all the time. In my opinion kids should have a special type of computer that you can only do homework on. Then they won’t waste their Mum’s time to fix up all the mistakes. This is because the computer fixes up all the mistakes and asks you what word you mean to write. I think kids should have their own computer and their brother and sister should have their computer.

What Central Means to me

I like playing soccer because I can be goalie and I can run around and kick the ball.
Tom